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the University Hospital in Kingston as it was in 1990 and again in 2020.

the University Hospital in Kingston as it was in 1990 and again in 2020. YwOVr
The maps display the University Hospital in Kingston as it was in 1990 and again in 2020. Overall, Nessan’s Road runs from east to west at the bottom, and the hospital is situated above this. By 2020, the main change is that the farmland had been replaced with infrastructure for the hospital. The farmland that stood in the northeast of the map had been replaced by a new hospital building used for inpatients, and the area of farmland in the east was being used as additional parking spaces in 2020. The original hospital building in the northwest of the map was being used exclusively for treating outpatients in 2020. At the west end of Nessan’s Road, a new entrance had been added specifically for ambulances with a road leading to the outpatient building. To the east, the old entrance became the public entrance, and that road to the hospital had two roundabouts built on it; the first giving access to the parking area and the second for accessing a new road that extends to the east. This new road ends at a third roundabout for entering the inpatient building or the northern entrance to the parking facility.
The maps display the University
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Hospital
in Kingston as it was in 1990 and again in 2020.
Overall
,
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Nessan
’s
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Road
runs from east to west at the bottom, and the
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hospital
is situated
above this. By 2020, the main
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change
is that the farmland had
been replaced
with infrastructure for the hospital.

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been replaced
by a
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new
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hospital
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building
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used
for inpatients, and the area of farmland in the east was being
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used
as additional parking spaces in 2020. The original
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hospital
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building
in the northwest of the map was being
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used
exclusively for treating outpatients in 2020.

At the west
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end
of
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Nessan
’s
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Road
, a
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new
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entrance
had been
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added
specifically
for ambulances with a
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road
leading to the outpatient
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building
. To the east, the
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old
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entrance
became the public
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entrance
, and that
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road
to the
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hospital
had two roundabouts built on it; the
first
giving access to the parking area and the second for accessing a
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new
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road
that extends to the east. This
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new
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road
ends at a third roundabout for entering the inpatient
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building
or the northern
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entrance
to the parking facility.

IELTS academic the University Hospital in Kingston as it was in 1990 and again in 2020.

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197 words
6.0
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