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The Main Aims of Exercise and Where People Exercise

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The bar graph and pie chart illustrate the primary goals of exercise and the venues respectively, where such exercises are performed by adults aged 20 to 50 years through a survey. Overall, the highest primary purpose for exercise by adults is on recreation whereas the lowest is on weight loss. In addition, the place with which most exercises are done is in gyms while the least is in public sports venues, playgrounds and other public places in equal measure. As for the bar graph, 40% of adults say that recreations is their main aim for exercise while a little over a tenth says weight loss is the reason why they exercise. While there are a quarter of adults whose main purpose is muscle toning, there is minor significance between 20 – to -50 – year olds who find disease prevention and mood improvement as their main goal with almost 15% and 10% respectively. The pie chart, on the other hand, shows that there are a third of adults who prefer gyms accounting to the majority of the population in comparison to those who likes parks as venues for their exercise which amounts to 20%. Parks, playground and other public places accounted for 45% of the population, at 15% each when it is distributed equally

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exercise
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exercises
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adults
 aged 20 to 50 years through a survey.

Overall
, the highest primary purpose for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercise
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adults
 is on recreation whereas the lowest is on weight loss. In addition
, the place with which most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercises
are done
 is in gyms while the least is in public sports venues, playgrounds and other public places in equal measure.

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adults
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exercise
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exercise
. While there are a quarter of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
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.

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 that there are a third of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
 who prefer gyms accounting to the majority of the population in comparison
 to those who likes parks as venues for their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingtasklessonworkoutactproblem
exercise
 which amounts to 20%. Parks, playground and other public places accounted for 45% of the population, at 15% each when it is distributed
equally