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the flowchart below shows how alluminium cans are recycled.

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The given diagram illustrates the recycling process of alluminium cans. It is clear there are seven main stages in the proscess commening with used cans and culminating with reusing. At the first stage in aluminium cans recycling process, used cans are put in private recycle without throw in public different rubbish. Subsequently, cans are collected and move by truck. At the following day satge, aliminium cans will have been brought in special machine to cleaning, sorting, shredding and compressing. After it is heated in resonable temperature until them smelting to make watery aluminium. Next, aluminium are rolled into rolls have thick from 2. 5 mm to 6. 0mm. The aluminium then is recycled into new cans which able to used to drink box. Finally, the new cans is reused in many factories to contain drink such as Coca Cola. Annual, in the UK there are 74 percent aluminium cans are recycle and reused.
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proscess
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recycling process,
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used
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are put
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rubbish.
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temperature until them smelting to
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to drink box.
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factories to contain drink such as Coca Cola. Annual, in the UK there are 74 percent
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are recycle and reused.
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