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The bar chart illustrates the outcomes of a survey regarding people's coffee and tea consumption habits in five major cities of Australia over the past month

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The bar chart illustrates the outcomes of a survey regarding people's coffee and tea consumption habits in five major cities of Australia over the past month. Overall, across all five cities with an exception to Adelaide, the majority of the people chose to go to a café. While a considerable fraction of people opted to buy instant coffee, the least popular option was to buy fresh coffee. In the cities of Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart, an overwhelming majority preferred to drink their coffee or tea from a café with percentages 61, 63 and 62 respectively. In Brisbane, however, although the favorable option was still going to a café (56%), a remarkable number of 53% residents liked buying instant coffee. While the second favorite choice was to buy instant coffee in 4 of the 5 cities, in Adelaide, it was the most preferred choice with 50% residents choosing this option marginally over the other 49% who went to a café. The least common alternative in all the locations was buying fresh coffee as the percentages remained below 45% consistently.
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