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The given table graphs compare the ratings regarding the print and non-print resources of a local library. It is interesting to see that almost half the above 40 age group preferred not to comment on the non-print material, which is computer software and DVDs. Regarding the range of books, the responses of 15-39 age group and those above 40 were almost similar. Almost half the under 15s gave the rating of very good, whereas a little over a quarter each of the other two age groups thought so. Satisfactory rating was given by approximately 50% of those above 15, whereas a third of the under 15 age group rated the range of books as satisfactory. Nearly 1 in 10 of the children below 15 were not happy with the range of books, but a quarter each of the other two groups rated the range of books as not good. When asked about the non-print material, almost 50% of the under 15s were not happy. A quarter each rated these resources as very good and satisfactory. Almost 50% of those aged between 15 and 39 said that the non-print resources were very good, 30% were satisfied and about a fifth were not happy with these resources. A very small minority of this age group did not comment on these resources. In contrast, just-under 50% of those over 40, did not comment on them. About 11% rated these resources as very good, but a fifth rated them as satisfactory and a similar proportion gave a ‘not good’ rating.
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regarding the print and non-print resources of a local library. It is interesting to
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half the above 40
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preferred not to comment on the non-print material, which is computer software and DVDs.

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, the responses of 15-39
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age
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and those above 40 were
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similar.
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, whereas a
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over a quarter each of the other two
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by approximately 50% of those above 15, whereas a third of the under 15
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these resources as
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, 30%
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and about a fifth were not happy with these resources. A
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minority of this
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did not comment on these resources.
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-under 50% of those over 40, did not comment on them. About 11%
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and a similar proportion gave a ‘not
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256 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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