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The graph below shows trends inn US meat and poultry consumption

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The graph compares the consumption of beef, pork, broilers and turkey in the United States between 1955 to 2012. As can be seen from the graph, beef is the most popular meat in American dinners, while turkey is the least popular. The consumption of broilers and beef showed an erratically trend Between 1955 and 1976 was a period of time when the consumption of beef peak of 90 pounds per person per year. The equivaleat figures given for pork and broilers were 50 pounds and 18 pounds respectively. Meanwhile turkey was the least popular meat, with figgures below 10 pounds per capita each year. in 2012, Broiler consumption climbed to a new high of 55 pounds in 2012, while beef and pork consumption decreased slightly to 50 pounds and 40 pounds, respectively. During this period, the amount of turkey consumed remained consistent at around 12 pounds.
The graph compares the
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beef
, pork, broilers and turkey in the United States
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between 1955 to 2012
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seen
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beef
is the most popular meat in American dinners, while turkey is the least popular. The
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consumption
of broilers and
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beef
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showed
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erratically trend


Between 1955 and 1976 was a period of time when the
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consumption
of
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beef
peak of
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90 pounds
per person per year. The
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equivaleat
figures
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given
for pork and broilers were
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50 pounds
and
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18 pounds
respectively
.
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Meanwhile
turkey was the least popular meat, with
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figgures
below
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10 pounds
per capita each year.

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in
2012, Broiler
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consumption
climbed to a new high of
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55 pounds
in 2012, while
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beef
and pork
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consumption
decreased
slightly
to
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50 pounds
and
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40 pounds
,
respectively
. During this period, the amount of
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turkey
consumed remained consistent at around
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12 pounds
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