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Average annual expenditures on cell phone and residenital phone services 2001-2010

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The line chart depicts the average spending of Americans on mobile phone and fixed line services between 2001 and 2010 It can be observed that yearly spending on cellular services rose dramatically throughout the time in question, whilst spending on residential services witnessed a sharp dropped In 2001, $700 was the average cost of residential phone service in the United States, while cell phone service was just under $200. Over the next five years, there was a slight decreased in expenditure on landlines, a fell of 200$. In comparison with mobile expense rose with around $300. By 2006, the US average spent just over $500 each on both telephone services. 2010 was the period of time when the average annual spending of the American for cell phone services increase dramaticaly, reaching to more than $ 750. By contrast, the number of spending on landline phones decreased to just above $400
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of Americans on mobile
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phone
and
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between 2001 and 2010

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on cellular
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rose
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throughout the time in question, whilst
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on residential
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witnessed a sharp dropped

In 2001, $700 was the
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cost of residential
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phone
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in the United States, while cell
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phone
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service
was
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under $200. Over the
next
five years, there was a slight decreased in expenditure on landlines, a fell of
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200$
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expense


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rose
with around $300.

By 2006, the US
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spent
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over $500 each on both telephone
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services
. 2010 was the period of time when the
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annual
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of the American for cell
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phone
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increase
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dramaticaly
, reaching to more than
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$ 750
. By contrast, the number of
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decreased to
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above $400

IELTS academic Average annual expenditures on cell phone and residenital phone services 2001-2010

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