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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the process of making cement and concrete.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the process of making cement and concrete. 061en
The figure indicates the phases and materials which can be applied in the process of manufacturing cements and concrete. In the cement production, firstly, limestone and clay Crush in a Crusher and after crushing it makes powder afterwards. This powder is put in mixer and mixter is attached with rotating heater, this heat is put in it and then the Powder is come upon the grinder and then makes a cement and then this cement is packed into bags. In concrete production, firstly, four materials are added in the Bowl 15% cement and sand water 25% sand and 15% level is added in bowl and makes and concrete mixer.
The figure indicates the phases and materials which can
be applied
in the process of manufacturing
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cements
and concrete.

In the
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cement
production,
firstly
, limestone and clay Crush in a Crusher and after crushing it
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makes
powder afterwards. This powder
is put
in mixer and
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mixter
is attached
with rotating heater, this heat
is put
in it and then the Powder is
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come
upon the grinder and then
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makes
a
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cement
and then this
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cement
is packed
into bags.

In concrete production,
firstly
, four materials are
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added
in the Bowl 15%
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cement
and sand water 25% sand and 15% level is
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added
in bowl and
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makes
and concrete mixer.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the process of making cement and concrete.

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