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The two tables below show responses of different age groups to a questionnaire with their opinion about the range of books and the non-print material of a local library. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show responses of different age groups to a questionnaire with their opinion about the range of books and the non-print material of a local library. 06YDq
The set of two tables compare information of ratings which are given by the people on printed books and non printed material. To begin with range of books, around half (55% )of people under 15s were gave very good response, where almost a third (33% ) was given satisfactory and 12% was rated not good. Surprisingly, around 50% of rating given by the people, who was between 50 and 39 age and above 40 respectively. Furthermore, almost a quarter feel dissatisfied ( 25%, 22%) resultantly. Finally, the people who were in 15 and 39 age and beyond 40 was rated good feedback by 27% and 28% substantially. Regarding non printed material, under 15s were reviewed not good, with 52℅. And 25%, 23℅ were gave very good as well as satisfying respond. On the contrary close to half (49℅) of those aged between 50 and 39 said that these resources were very good, 30℅ were fulfilled and about fifth (19℅) were not happy. Interestingly, people who aged above 40 were not commented, at 48%. Moreover, only 19% and 11% were appeased and happy with this material. Overall, it can be concluded from the table that roughly a half the above 40 age group preferred not to comment on the non print material.
The set of two tables compare information of ratings which are
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was rated
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feedback by 27% and 28%
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, with 52℅. And 25%, 23℅ were
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very
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as well
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, 30℅
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who aged above 40 were not commented, at 48%.
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19% and 11%
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IELTS academic The two tables below show responses of different age groups to a questionnaire with their opinion about the range of books and the non-print material of a local library.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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