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Anthropolgy students from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course

Anthropolgy students from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course GwEdL

The pie graph introduce the results of a study made about what anthropologist undergraduate students destination are after finishing their courses and which is their salary after five year's work. The chart summarise that often more than the 50% of the students are able to be employed in an full time work. The other half of the undergraduate are divided in small category. For istance is intresting that only the 8% of them follow up their studies by choosing to enroll in a full time postgrad study. The biggest share of the second half of the pie is composed by students that decide to be part time workers they rappresent the 15% of the share. During their career the most remunerative jobs for anthropologist are found in the government sector. The chart show that 50% of the employee is expect to have a salary of more than 100. 000 $ anually after 5 year experience. Compared to private companies where only the 30% of the employee have the same salary.

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year's
 work.

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summarise
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often
 more than the 50% of the students are able to be employed
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an
 full time work. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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small
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intresting
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only
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postgrad
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part time
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rappresent
 the 15% of the share.

During their career the most remunerative jobs for anthropologist are found
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government
 sector. The chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 that 50% of the employee is Consider using a past participle here: "expected".expected
expect
 to have a salary of more than 100. The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$000".$000
000 $
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anually
 after 5 year experience. Compared to private This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the 30% of the employee have the same salary. 