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Why india and Indians are poverty country?

Why india and Indians are poverty country? Ryglp
Indians are very smart and talent. They got freedom 75 years ago but till now many politicians tell India is developing a country for election canvassing but real time not well for development side because main issues are unemployment, population and country GDP. Now I explain reasons for why India is a poor country in following paragraphs. To begin with, India is a democracy country but major problem is their don't pay taxes regularly so it is huge reason for damage country economy and developing nation. In addition, India back bone of agriculture farming but present days farm land replace to residential and commercial purpose to construction. it will big problem for further generation and country budget. Moreover, India education system totally different to foreign countries because this education system totally business for instance affluent, politicians and government officials children are studying only cooperative schools but poor childrens are studying only government schools because poverty issues for People. Other side, India is good bonding for developed nations like America, Japan, Israel and Europe countries but some politicians to develop their own income. Indians are very intelligent such as majority of Indians great position in MNC company's, space research center and political leaders. Their plenty of resources are available but the local government utilisation totally failed. In addition Indian history more scams and abuses for an example Rafael scam, IT scam and political scam. In conclusion, India is one of the competition country for other countries example this pandemic situation pharma sector is very strong, business side. the local authority to give opportunity to young generation to decrease graph of unemployment it will help for become a fast developing country for India
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for election canvassing
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real time not well for development side
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main issues are unemployment, population and
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GDP.
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reasons for why India is a poor
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major problem is their don't pay taxes
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it is huge reason for damage
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economy and developing nation.
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present days farm land replace to residential and commercial purpose to construction.
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budget.

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business
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cooperative schools
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Other side, India is
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strong, business side.
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IELTS academic Why india and Indians are poverty country?

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280 words
5.5
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