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birth and death rate in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.

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This line graph shows the dynamic nature of birth and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101. It shows information about the past, present and future trends of birth and death rates in New Zealand. In the past, birth rate was comparatively higher than death rate in New Zealand. Thereafter, in 1901, around 20, 000 children were born whereas around 10, 000 people died. In 1921, death rate suddenly rose with around 13, 000 deaths and the birth rate became low with about 15, 000 births. Till 1961, the birth rate kept on rising but it declined in 1981. Although, it increased again in 2001. Starting from 1941 to 2001, the death rate was highly fluctuating with slight differences in between. From 2021 to 2101 in the future, it is expected that the birth rate will decrease with constant changes in between and it will be around 50, 000 in 2101. From 2041 to 2101, the death rate will continuously increase and will exceed the birth rate with approximately 60, 000 deaths in 2101. Overall, in the past, from 1901, the birth rate was lower than death rate, but, it is expected that the death rate will continuously get higher than birth rate from 2041 onwards till 2101.
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in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.

It
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information about the past, present and future trends of
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and death
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in New Zealand.

In the past,
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birth
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was
comparatively
higher than death
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in New Zealand. Thereafter, in 1901,
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around
20, 000 children
were born
whereas
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around
10, 000
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people
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died
. In 1921, death
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suddenly
rose with
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around
13, 000 deaths and the
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birth
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became low with about 15, 000
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births
. Till 1961, the
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birth
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kept
on rising
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but
it declined in 1981.
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, it increased again in 2001. Starting from 1941 to 2001, the death
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was
highly
fluctuating with slight differences in between.

From 2021 to 2101 in the future, it is
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will decrease with constant
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changes
in between and it will be
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around
50, 000 in 2101.

From 2041 to 2101, the death
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will
continuously
increase and will exceed the
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birth
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with approximately 60, 000 deaths in 2101.

Overall
, in the past, from 1901, the
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was lower than death
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,
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, it is
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that the death
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will
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higher than
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from 2041 onwards till 2101.
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IELTS academic birth and death rate in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.

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