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Many people assume that modern technology gives them a big help in their daily life and work. Nevertheless, others think that modern inventions bring them too many troubles in their social life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these two views?

Many people assume that modern technology gives them a big help in their daily life and work. Nevertheless, others think that modern inventions bring them too many troubles in their social life. with these two views? xg7mg
Ever since a long time ago, technology has given us a big help to have tasks done faster and easier, and it has become an essential part in our daily life. But on the other hand, many people think that modern inventions bring them too many troubles in their social life. I myself completely agree that modern technology is really helpful in our daily life and work. Modern technology makes housework more convenient and efficient than ever. If we take a look around our house, we can observe that we’re surrounded by many different machines. Washing machine and dryer help us get clean dried clothes in a really short amount of time – back then, even in a sunny day, clothes will not be dried in just one hour. The vacuum cleaner, even though it is louder than the traditional broom, but it makes it easier to clean the dusts in the corners or under furniture. They all may seem as a matter of course, but try thinking about doing those tasks in the traditional way before those machines exist – and you will feel lucky that you are born in the modern time. Modern inventions also help us a lot in the work life. Computers, tablets, smartphones, now they are things that we can’t be without while working or studying. The born of Internet makes it easier and faster to search information. People can contact with each other in just one second through email, and we don’t have to wait a long time for the reply like through letters. Notes, charts, and documents are all can be saved in an USB, so it reduces the amount of paper need to be used and also make those document easier to be accessible. Especially in this pandemic time when all normal activities are restricted, modern technology helps us a lot to stay update with what’s going on in the world and somewhat stay connected with each other. But even though modern inventions have brought us a lot of support, they also make people somewhat more troubled in their social life. We are more attached to the screens, and it reduces the quality time that we spend with precious people in our lives. We can easily see a family in a restaurant who are unintentionally each look at their own screens rather than talking with each other, even the young kids. But I don’t say that staring into the screen is bad, we just get used to it as that’s what we do to communicating and sharing things about life with each other when we’re apart. In conclusion, modern technology has helped us in many ways to make our lives much easier than before and I think it’s something that many people have to learn to appreciate. Nevertheless, we still have to learn how not to be too dependent on them or otherwise they will take control in our own lives.
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help
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easier
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modern
inventions bring them too
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troubles in their social
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life
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technology
is
really
helpful in our daily
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life
and work.

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makes
housework more convenient and efficient than ever. If we take a look around our
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house
, we can observe that we’re surrounded by
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many
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different
machines. Washing machine and dryer
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help
us
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get
clean dried clothes in a
really
short amount of
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time
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back then, even in a sunny day, clothes will not
be dried
in
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just
one hour. The vacuum cleaner,
even though
it is louder than the traditional broom,
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but
it
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makes
it
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easier
to clean the dusts in the corners or under furniture. They all may seem as a matter
of course
,
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but
try thinking about doing those tasks in the traditional way
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before
those machines exist
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–
and you will feel lucky that you
are born
in the
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modern
time.

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also
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help
us a lot in the work
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life
. Computers, tablets, smartphones,
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they are things that we can’t be without while working or studying.
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Internet
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makes
it
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easier
and faster to search information.
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can contact with each
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other
in
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one second through email, and we don’t
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also
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those document
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easier
to be accessible.
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in this pandemic
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when all normal activities
are restricted
,
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modern
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technology
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helps
us a lot to stay update with what’s going on in the world and somewhat stay connected with each other.

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even though
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modern
inventions have brought us
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also
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life
. We are more attached to the screens, and it
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reduces
the quality
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that we spend with precious
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people
in our
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each look at their
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screens
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, even the young kids.
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, we
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with each
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when we’re apart.

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,
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learn to appreciate.
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learn how not to be too dependent on them or
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IELTS academic Many people assume that modern technology gives them a big help in their daily life and work. Nevertheless, others think that modern inventions bring them too many troubles in their social life. with these two views?

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