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The two table show the sales of Fairtrade – Labeled Coffee and Bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five nations Of Europe.

The two table show the sales of Fairtrade – Labeled Coffee and Bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five nations Of Europe. KVJ5L

In the first table, exert the coffee sales increasing in the five countries. Denmark and Sweden increased in the small amount of sales, its 1. 8-2 million euros and 0. 8- 1 million euros. Belgium increment was larged, its 1-1. 7 millions. However, the sales rate doubled in Switzerland from 3-6 million euros. Lastly the incredible increased was 1. 5- 20 million euros and the country is UK. The second table, Switzerland is the record break bananas sales in the last five years. The Sales ratio is 15-47 million euros. The UK and Belgium sales grew from 1-5. 5 million euros and 0. 6-4 million euros. Sweden and Denmark are the largest increment in the last five years of bananas sales. This amount is 1. 8-1 million euros and 2-0. 9 million euros. Comparing the two tables, sales of Fairtrade coffee in 1999 ranged from 0. 8-3 million euros and the other side bananas sales ranged from 0. 6-2 millions while Switzerland increased huge 15 millions euros. In 2004, sales for both Product increasing just Sweden and Denmark fall down bananas sales.

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