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The diagram shows the result of a survey in which people aged 16 and above were asked to give their preferences of devices for browsing the internet. The pie chart illustrates which device out of the smartphone, laptop, tablet and desktop computer preferred by the internet users to access the internet

The diagram shows the result of a survey in which people aged 16 and above were asked to give their preferences of devices for browsing the internet. The pie chart illustrates which device out of the smartphone, laptop, tablet and desktop computer preferred by the internet users to access the internet 2K8p6

The given pie chart shows the preference of electronic devices like laptops, desktops, smartphones and tablets on which the people above 16 years of age would like to use the internet. The choice of these gadgets depends on whether it’s used at home or outdoors. Overall, laptops and smartphones cover the majority of the chart with a computer desktop in the minority. Smartphones are smaller in size and comfortable to carry, which is why it’s feasible to access internet over it wherever people go hence it one third of internet usage is over smartphones. Laptops have about 30 percent preference to access internet on. The reason for such high percentage is because of their portability. A desktop computer can’t be moved from home therefore, only 14% internet usage is over desktop. Although tablets are handy, people prefer smartphones over tablets and on that account, it’s utilization is just a little less than one fifth. Adults over 16 stay outdoors most of the time which is the reason of low operation of desktops and tablets.

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 smartphones. Laptops have about 30 percent preference to access internet on. The reason for such high percentage is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 of their portability.

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 outdoors most of the time which is the reason of low operation of desktops and tablets. 