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The two table demonstrate 5 reasons for people chose to give up smoking, and when do they do it.

The two table demonstrate 5 reasons for people chose to give up smoking, and when do they do it. RRrgV
The two table demonstrate 5 reasons for people chose to give up smoking, and when do they do it. Overall, it can be seen clearly that people want to stoping smoking becase general heath occuped the majority proportion more than 4 other reasons. And the most of them want to stop smoking. Smoker want to give up smoking for reason of wanting better for heath in generalare in 71% in number of total of cigaretters smoked per day. which was followed by the proportion of reason for financial considerations at 31%. Also in the table, the percentage of people who smoking more tha 20 cigaretters per day choose to giving up smoking for present heath problems is twice as much as the percentage of people who smoking less than 10 cigaretters per day. The number of people who total that intend to give up smoking is 71 %, which more than twice as much as people who do not intend to give up. the percentage of people smoking fewer than 10 cigaretters per day who think will giving up smoking in 6 mounth is higher than the total number of people who smoked 10-19 cigaretters and 20 plus cigaretters per day.
The two table demonstrate 5
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give
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, and when do they do it.

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stoping
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general heath
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. And the most of them want to
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stop
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Smoker want to
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for
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of wanting better for heath in
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in 71% in number of total of
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cigaretters
smoked per day.
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which
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reason
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people
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who
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smoking
more
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20
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cigaretters
per day choose to giving up
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smoking
for present heath problems is twice as much as the percentage of
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people
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who
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smoking
less than 10
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cigaretters
per day.

The number of
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total that intend to
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give
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smoking
is 71 %, which more than twice as much as
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people
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who
do not intend to
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give
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people
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smoking
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cigaretters
per day
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people
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smoked 10-19
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cigaretters
and 20 plus
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cigaretters
per day.
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IELTS academic The two table demonstrate 5 reasons for people chose to give up smoking, and when do they do it.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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