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The line graph provides data on the weight of three various consumptions, namely margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, and butter over a 26 years period.

The line graph provides data on the weight of three various consumptions, namely margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, and butter over a 26 years period. x8o7Q
The line graph provides data on the weight of three various consumptions, namely margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, and butter over a 26 years period. Overall, the number of butter and margarine experienced a sharp decrease, whilst low fat & reduced spreads witnessed a surge to 70 grammes, leaving the other two consumptions far behind. With regard to the number of butter, it witnessed a gradual increase until 1986, with the consumption numbers reaching the highest point of 160 grammes, whereas the pattern was reversed over the second part of the period to dip about 50%. In terms of margarine, it began at about 90 grammes, whereas it falled to 80 grammes, before constanting at a peak of 100 grammes over next five years periods. The 1 decade that followed dipped to the lowest point of 40 grammes. In 1996, the new consumption, which was called low fat & reduced spreads, exceeded approximately 10 grammes, and reached 90 grammes, falling to roughly 70 grammes at the end of the time frame.
The line graph provides data on the weight of three various
consumptions
,
namely
margarine, low
fat
&
reduced
spreads, and butter over a 26 years period.

Overall
, the number of butter and margarine experienced a sharp decrease, whilst low
fat
&
reduced
spreads witnessed a surge to 70
grammes
, leaving the other two
consumptions
far behind.

With regard to the number of butter, it witnessed a gradual increase until 1986, with the
consumption
numbers reaching the highest point of 160
grammes
, whereas the pattern
was reversed
over the second part of the period to dip about 50%. In terms of margarine, it began at about 90
grammes
, whereas it
falled
to 80
grammes
,
before
constanting
at a peak of 100
grammes
over
next
five years periods. The 1 decade that followed dipped to the lowest point of 40
grammes
.

In 1996, the new
consumption
, which
was called
low
fat
&
reduced
spreads, exceeded approximately 10
grammes
, and reached 90
grammes
, falling to roughly 70
grammes
at the
end
of the time frame.
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IELTS academic The line graph provides data on the weight of three various consumptions, namely margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, and butter over a 26 years period.

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