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Table graph about information and prediction regarding change in percentage of the population of 65 and above

Table graph about information and prediction regarding change in percentage of the population of 65 and above 1ADpA

Following shows a tabular representation and prediction of the change in the elderly population (aged 65 and above) in over three countries ( Canada, Germany, UK) Overall, there is a percentage increase in all 3 countries which leads to the conclusive increase in predicted population in the year 2030. Clearly, Germany has the highest proportion of population escalation while UK having the least over the given period of time. Between 1988 and 2000 there is a considerable increase of elderly citizens in Germany and Canada of about 5%, 20. 45% - 25. 32% and 16. 32% to 20. 67% respectively. While the Britons had a marginal rise in the percentage of increase in the population of the aged. It is anticipated that with the current growth rate all three countries would have a steady increase populous of the aged group. The expected jump about 26. 32% for Canada, 30. 42% for Germany and 20. 35 % for UK

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