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The two pie charts shows the proportion of energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

The two pie charts shows the proportion of energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003. MVQq

The two pie charts present the information about the proportion of six various sources which were used to generate the energy in a particular nation from 1985 to 2003. Overall, the maximum proportion of oil used to produce energy in given all years. Whereas, others sources including natural gas, coal, hydrogen and other renewable resources were less popular in a country. It can be seen from the pie charts that the oil was main source for energy production, despite its usage dramatically dropped from 52% in 1985 to 39% in 2003. Otherwise, the coal and oil were used in less proportion (8%) and (4%), but after 18 years, the utilisation of coal increased from 8% to 13% and exceeding the figure in hydrogen, which remained stable at 4%. In comparison, over the given eighteen years period, the proportion of energy produced from other renewable resources plummeted with the difference of 3%. Besides this, the uses of nuclear was more preferred by Country in 1985 than in 2003.

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