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The chart illustrates that the information about the three types of International migration in the UK from 1999 to 2008.

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The chart illustrates that the information about the three types of International migration in the UK from 1999 to 2008. The immigration rates of the UK showed a steady but significant rise over the period, while the thousands of net in the UK experienced a downward. IN 2003 the immigration rates of the UK were nearly 500 thousand respectively. The emigration rate increased sharply throughout the period, exceeding the net rate in 2004 and reaching almost 250 thousand at the end of the period. In the meantime, the thousands of immigration in the UK grew to 600 thousand in 2004, and then remain steady until 2008. During 1999-2007 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 400 thousand and continued with a gradual increase to about up 400 thousand in 2008. In early 1999 the net rate of the UK (300 thousand) was the lowest among the other two sectors. However, It dramatically declined to about 120 thousand in 2003. Then, there was a growth of over 200 thousand in 2007, but the immigration and emigration rate was the highest at the end of the period.
The chart illustrates that the information about the three types of International migration in the UK from 1999 to 2008. The
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, while the thousands of net in the UK experienced a downward. IN 2003 the
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, exceeding the net
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in 2004 and reaching almost 250 thousand at the
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. In the meantime, the thousands of
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in the UK grew to 600 thousand in 2004, and then remain steady until 2008. During 1999-2007 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 400 thousand and continued with a gradual increase to about up 400 thousand in 2008. In early 1999 the net
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of the UK (300 thousand) was the lowest among the other two sectors.
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declined to about 120 thousand in 2003. Then, there was a growth of over 200 thousand in 2007,
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