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The charts below show the information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. NbkW
The pie charts compare the percentage of different age groups of Yemen and Italy in the years 2000 and 2050. Overall, it is evident that the population of both countries are forcasted to become older but with different paces. In 2000, Slightly more than 50% of Yemen’s population was under 14 years old, while that of Italy was only 14. 3%. In the same year, approximately 46% and 4% of people in Yemen aged between 15-59 and over 60 years, respectively. However, the corresponding figures for Italy were around 62% and 24% which means that Italy had older population in thus year. In 2050, however, it is predicted that both countries will experience aging population. The proportion of children in Yemen and Italy will decrease by approximately 13% and 3%. However, the population of people between 15-59 year old and over 60 year old, is expected to increase in Yemen (by 9% and 2%). Italy will saw a sharp increase in the percentage of the elderly, from 24% to 42%, while that of 15-59 year old will decease to 46. 2%.
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age groups of Yemen and Italy in the years 2000 and 2050.

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was under 14 years
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. The proportion of children in Yemen and Italy will decrease by approximately 13% and 3%.
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