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The two pie charts show the percentage of pollutants entering a particular part of ocean in 1997 and 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The given two pie charts illustrate the proportion of pollutants comming a different part of ocean in year of 1997 and 2007. Looking at the graphs in more details, in year of 1997 18% pollutants was domestic sewage while this ratio increased in year of 2007 about 29%. 17% pollutanted was industrial wasted and this trend was decreased in year of 2007. Pollutanted from air was 30% in year of 1997 and this figure was decreased only 1% in year of 2007. In year of 2007 14% pollutanted was offshore oil while this proportion decreased in year of 1997 about 5% respectively. 17% pollutanted of industrial waste in year of 1997 and this trend decreased about 9% in year of 2007. only 22% pollutanted was marine ocean in year of 1997 while only 17% pollutanted in year of 2007. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, the maximum pollutanted part of ocean was domestic sewage, air and this proportion was decreased in the next year.
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of 1997 and 2007. Looking at the graphs in more
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of 1997 18% pollutants was domestic sewage while this ratio increased in
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of 2007 about 29%. 17%
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from air was 30% in
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of 1997 and this figure was
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of 2007 14%
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pollutanted
was offshore oil while this proportion
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of 1997 about 5%
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pollutanted
of industrial waste in
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part of ocean was domestic sewage, air and this proportion was
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IELTS academic The two pie charts show the percentage of pollutants entering a particular part of ocean in 1997 and 2007.

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