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In Australia, coffee and tea is quite popular and consumed by many people. Especially in the five cities in Australia, there is more than half of the population consumed these drink in a month. In the chart below shows the percentage of the city residence that consumed coffee and tea in a month. In Sydney and Melbourne, there is over 60 percent of residence went to cafe in a month. The least percentage of citizen that went to cafe is Adelaide city with less than half of the population went to that place. The instant coffee is quite popular in Hobart city and Brisbane city with over the half of the population consumed this in recent month. In the city of Sydney, instant coffee is so unpopular that less than 45 percent of the residence drink this type of drink on a month. Fresh coffee is not really consumed by many Australian with averaging less than 45 percent of the population consumed this. And even unpopular in Adelaide and Brisbane with less than 35 percent of residence bought this coffee. Nevertheless, more than 40 percent of the population in the city of Melbourne and Sydney bought a fresh coffee in recent 4 weeks.
In Australia,
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consumed
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in Australia, there is more than half of the
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population
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consumed
these drink in a month.

In the chart below
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the percentage of the city
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that
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consumed
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and tea in a
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month
. In Sydney and Melbourne, there is over 60
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. The least percentage of citizen that went to
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is Adelaide city with
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than half of the
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went to that place. The instant
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is quite popular in Hobart city and Brisbane city with over the half of the
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population
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consumed
this in recent
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. In the city of Sydney, instant
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is
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drink this type of drink on a
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. Fresh
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this. And even unpopular in Adelaide and Brisbane with
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in the city of Melbourne and Sydney
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in recent 4 weeks.
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