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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. y8rP
These 2 map diagrams illustrate path access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Here is a summary of changes occurred in this time period. From a general point of view, there are no major changes between the given duration in the position of the city hospital, ring road (which spread all around city hospital) and hospital road while there is a change in bus station architecture. New addition made by placing public car park on right side of the ring road. In 2007, car parking for employees and locals situated at top of the city road and south of the ring road which covers the city hospital while in 2010 that place allocated only for staff members of the hospital. The position of the city hospital and ring road remained the same as earlier. Other places like hospital road and city road also maintained their place in comparison with 3 years ago. Some locations get changed and a few added new from 2007 to 2010. On hospital road 2 new roundabout inserted at starting and ending points of the road. The new bus station's area size received more than double of its 2007 size and it's got connected to hospital roads top and bottom circles. Public car parking allocated in a separate location in front of the hospital's east side road off.
These 2 map diagrams illustrate path access to a city
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in 2007 and in 2010. Here is a summary of
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occurred in this time period.

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between the
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duration in the position of the city
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hospital
,
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ring
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(which spread all around city
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and
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while there is a
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change
in bus station architecture.
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New
addition made by placing public car park on right side of the
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ring
road.

In 2007, car parking for employees and locals situated at top of the city
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road
and south of the
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ring
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which covers the city
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hospital
while in 2010 that place allocated
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only
for staff members of the
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. The position of the city
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hospital
and
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ring
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road
remained the same as earlier. Other places like
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and city
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also
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with 3 years ago.

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locations
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and a few
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added
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new
from 2007 to 2010. On
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2
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roundabout inserted at starting and ending points of the
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. The
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bus station's area size received more than double of its 2007 size and it's
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connected to
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top and bottom circles. Public car parking allocated in a separate location in front of the hospital's east side
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off.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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