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The two pie charts provides information about the percentage of produce energy from different sources in the country from 1985 to 2003.

The two pie charts provides information about the percentage of produce energy from different sources in the country from 1985 to 2003. aDQX

The two pie charts provides information about the percentage of produce energy from different sources in the country from 1985 to 2003. Overall, the producing of oil was the highest proportion, while the least use has for other renewable energy. As well as gas and coal have upward trend, but hydrogen is remain stable and there are decline in use forms oil and nuclear during that given period. In 1985, the energy source derived from oil was the greatest percentage at 52%, whereas in 2003, fell to 39%. The natural gas and coal were increased rapidly by 9% and 6% respectively between 1985 and 2003. On the other hand, others renewable energy were the lowest percentage at 1% in 1985 and grow to 4% by 2003. Meanwhile, there is decline in the percentage of the nuclear energy by 5% from 1985 to 2003. In addition to, hydrogen is stabilized with 4% during that period.

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 period.

In 1985, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 source derived from oil was the greatest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 at 52%, whereas in 2003, fell to 39%. The natural gas and coal were increased
rapidly
 by 9% and 6% respectively
 between 1985 and 2003. On the other hand
, others renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 were the lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 at 1% in 1985 and grow to 4% by 2003.

Meanwhile, there is decline in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of the nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 by 5% from 1985 to 2003. In addition
 to, hydrogen is stabilized
 with 4% during that period. 