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The given two map provides us information about the changes occurred on the village, now and 10 years ago .

The given two map provides us information about the changes occurred on the village, now and 10 years ago. 36bJ
The given two map provides us information about the changes occurred on the village, now and 10 years ago. Overall, the village park has witnessed the development and expansion of the area. The village park was relatively small and consisted two tennis courts towards the north between the children’s area in the north east and car park towards the north west, which could be for 20 cars. It can be seen the football pitch was in the center of layout. Towards south east of map it can be seen the small pond and towards east of pond there are woods. After ten years, there is an expansion on tennis has increased to four courts and the children’s play area not only expand towards north east, but also divided to area one for children’s play and the another one for soft play area, the toilets has been added under them. The car park is expanded also, to manage about 40 cars towards the north west. football pitch is located in center of map, but they expand with more space. the pond has been converted to boating lake and they replaced the woods by cafe in the corner of the south east.
The
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given
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map
provides us information about the
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changes
occurred on the village,
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now
and 10 years ago.

Overall
, the village
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park
has witnessed the development and expansion of the area.

The village
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park
was
relatively
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small
and consisted two tennis courts towards the
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north
between the children’s
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area
in the
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north east
and
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car
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park
towards the
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north west
, which could be for 20
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cars
. It can be
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seen
the football pitch was in the center of layout. Towards
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south east
of map it can be
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seen
the
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small
pond and towards east of pond there are woods.

After ten years, there is an expansion on tennis has increased to four courts and the children’s play
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area
not
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only
expand towards
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north east
,
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but
also
divided to
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area
one for children’s play and the another one for soft play
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area
, the toilets has been
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added
under them.

The
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car
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park
is expanded
also
, to manage about 40
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cars
towards the
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north west
.
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football
pitch
is located
in center of map,
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but
they expand with more space.
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the
pond has
been converted
to boating
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lake and
they replaced the woods by
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cafe
in the corner of the
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south east
.

IELTS academic The given two map provides us information about the changes occurred on the village, now and 10 years ago.

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200 words
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