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The chart below shows the pecentage of households in owned and rented acommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 20111

The chart below shows the pecentage of households in owned and rented acommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 20111 5xap
The given chart depicts the percentage of households in accomodation ownership and retation in England and Wales during 1918 – 2011. The first aspect is the households in owned. In 1918, the percentage of households only 22% and reached 50% in 1971. The amounts of households owning accomodation continously increased since 1971 and reached 69% after 30 yeas. However, it slightly decreased into 67% in 2011. The second aspect is the household in rented accomodation. In constrat with the first aspect, in 1918, the number of households rented acommodation holds the highest percentage in whole period with 77%. From time to time, it felt down to 32% in 2001 and marginally increased 3% more in 2011. In 1971, the percentage of households owned and rented acommodation reached the same amount, which were 50% of households. Generally, it witnessed the noticeable change of tendancy from rentation to ownership in the period from 1918 to 2011 in England and Wales.
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accomodation
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retation
in England and Wales during 1918 – 2011.

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22% and reached 50% in 1971. The amounts of
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owning
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accomodation
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continously
increased since 1971 and reached 69% after 30 yeas.
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, it
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decreased into 67% in 2011.

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in rented
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accomodation
. In
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constrat
with the
first
aspect, in 1918, the number of
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households
rented
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acommodation
holds the highest
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percentage
in whole period with 77%. From time to time, it felt down to 32% in 2001 and
marginally
increased 3% more in 2011. In 1971, the
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households
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owned
and rented
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acommodation
reached the same amount, which were 50% of households.

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, it witnessed the noticeable
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rentation
to ownership in the period from 1918 to 2011 in England and Wales.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the pecentage of households in owned and rented acommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 20111

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