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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. L7b6

The bar chart illustrates the trend in people's choice for buying and drinking coffee and tea in the last four weeks in five different Australian cities. At a glance, The people of Adelaide had bought more instant coffee rather than going to a cafe. It is evident the going to a cafe for coffee and tea was the most common habit in all of the Australian cities except Adelaide where more people prefer instant coffee over any other. In the terms of Sydney and Melbourne, more than 60 percent of people went to a cafe for coffee in the last 4 weeks. Meanwhile, above 45 percent of citizens of Sydney and Melbourne bought instant coffee, whereas, The portion of people who bought fresh coffee was around 44 and 43 percent respectively. Move on to the remaining cities, It is seen the having coffee and tea at a cafe was the first choice of the people of Hobart which was at around 64 percent, followed by Bristance and Adelaide at 56 and 49 percent respectively. At the same time, around 34 percent of citizens of choose fresh coffee compared to nearly 38 percent of those in Hobart. At last, a fine similarity can be seen regarding buying instant coffee between 50 to 55 percent. Overall, The highest number of people went to a cafe for coffee and the lowest people prefer to buy fresh coffee.

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