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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. 03wQ
The pie chart illustrate the outcomes of a feedback to the parkway Hotel how they give rating the hotel's customer service. The common questionnaire was given to 100 guests in two different years 2005 and 2010. Data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, In the year 2005 a number of customers give rating as satisfactory 45% and very few people rated "Excellent" with 5% that is too low of that year. Similarly, huge number of people give rating as "good" in 2010 and many of them give "Very poor" rating that is 4% compared to 100%. Firstly, In 2005 Parkway Hotel take feedback from there customer numerous of them give "Satisfactory" that is 45% and people gives "Poor" with 21% and 15% is "Very poor" and 14% was give "Good" and last 5% people give "Excellent". Secondly, Number of people in 2010 rated "Good" with 39% and 17% was give "Satisfactory" And 12% of guests was rated "Poor". 28% people give "Excellent" and too less customers was rated as "Very poor" respectively.
The pie chart illustrate the outcomes of a feedback to the parkway Hotel how they
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and 14% was
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and last 5%
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with 39% and 17% was
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. 28%
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and too
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

Academic
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4 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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