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The given pie charts indicate the survey information that what makes people of two different age groups happy.

The given pie charts indicate the survey information that what makes people of two different age groups happy. p5L7d

The given pie charts indicate the survey information that what makes people of two different age groups happy. Overall, most people who belong to both groups feel happy due to two reasons which are doing hobbies and achievement at work. As we can see from the charts, the highest reason for the happiness of both people is Achievement at work (31% for people under 30 and 32% for other people). Doing hobbies which is the second-largest percentage of both group mention doing hobbies as making them happier are also very important for two groups. Turning now to the differences, 18% of young people feel happy by having a good appearance. This is followed by 15% who state that travel brings them happiness. On the second hand, none of the two factors is mentioned in the older group. 20% of them are cheerful by having financial security and 14% say they feel much happier when they are with their family.

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