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The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey percentage wise in the years 2000 and 2016. Overall, at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least to the economy of Turkey, while agriculture was the most significant economic sector. In comparison, at the end of the period healthcare and education became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was made by finance, business, and other services. Construction sector accounted for 3% of Turkey’s economy in 2000, and experienced a more than threefold increase to one-tenth in 2016. Economic income from trade, utilities, and transportation was 14% in 2000 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the period, manufacturing and finance, business, and other services made up 8% and 5% of Turkey’s economy respectively, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016. Agriculture, which comprised almost a quarter of Turkey’s economy in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016. In 2000, economic outputs from government and leisure and hospitality sectors were at 12% and 17% respectively, and both decreased by 3% after the 16-year period. In contrast, the contribution from the healthcare and education sector remained constant in both years at 17%.
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of Turkey percentage wise in the years 2000 and 2016.

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, at the beginning of the
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construction contributed the least to the
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economy
of Turkey, while agriculture was the most significant
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healthcare and education became the largest
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segment and the lowest contribution
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Construction
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accounted for 3% of Turkey’s
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in 2000, and experienced a more than threefold increase to one-tenth in 2016.
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income from trade, utilities, and transportation was 14% in 2000 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the
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, manufacturing and finance, business, and other services made up 8% and 5% of Turkey’s
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respectively
, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016.

Agriculture, which comprised almost a quarter of Turkey’s
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in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016. In 2000,
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outputs from
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and leisure and hospitality
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were at 12% and 17%
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, and both decreased by 3% after the 16-year
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, the contribution from the healthcare and education
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remained constant in both years at 17%.
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