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The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of turkey in 2000 and 2016. GExg

The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of turkey percentagewise in two separate years 2000 and 2016. Overall, at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least significant part to the economy of turkey. While the agriculture was the most significant part of the economy. In comparison, at the end of the period healthcare and education became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was made by finance, business and other services. Construction sector accounted for 3% of turkey’s economic in 2000, and experienced a more than threefold to one-tenth in 2016. Economic income from trade, utilities and transportation was 14% in 2000 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the period, manufacturing and finance, business and other services made up 8% and 5% of turkey’s economy respectively, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016. Agriculture which comprised almost a quarter of turkey’s economy in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016. In 2000 economic outputs from government and leisure and hospitality sectors were at 12 % and 17 % respectively. And both decrease by 3 % after 16-year period. In contrast contribution from health care and education sector remained constant in both years at 17%

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 in two separate years 2000 and 2016.

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 segment and the lowest contribution was made
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 in 2000, and experienced a more than threefold to one-tenth in 2016. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfiscalindustrialcommercialmonetarybudgetary
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 income from trade, utilities and transportation was 14% in 2000 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
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, manufacturing and finance, business and other services made up 8% and 5% of Did you mean the country "Turkey" (which needs to be capitalized)?Turkey
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economy
respectively
, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016.

Agriculture which comprised almost a quarter of Did you mean the country "Turkey" (which needs to be capitalized)?Turkey
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economy
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 outputs from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
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 and leisure and hospitality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sectors
 were at 12 % and 17 % respectively
. And both decrease by 3 % after 16-year You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
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. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?contrast,
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 contribution from health care and education You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
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 remained constant in both years at 17%