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The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010

The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010 pdB0

The charts provide information about the retail sectors of online shopping sales in year 2005 and 210 in Canada. The most appealing data is that electronics and appliances were both gave major contribution to Canada online shopping sales. Looking at the first data from 2005, home furnishing became the second major contributor with 25% which only a small difference with food and beverages (22%) while electronics and appliances with 35% became the most wanted category for online shopping in Canada. Whereas video games only gave 18%. Similarly in 2010, electronics and appliances are still the majority for online shopping although it decreased 5%. Followed by food and beverages which were increased 10% from 22% to 32% followed by video games with a slight grew to 23%. While on the contrary, home furnishing decreased significantly from 25% to the last contributor which is 15%.

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