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The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. 0Ljq

The chart illustrates that the number of accidents and injures for per hundred million passenger miles travelled by various transportation kind during 2002. These are commuter rail, heavy rail, light rail and bus. First of all, beginning with commuter rail, noticing that in the year, the quantity of incidents and injures is lesser in comparison of others consequently they are not more than 20. There is light rail in third place which acidents were 75 and these were 25 more than heavy rail. On the other hand, the quantity of heavy and light rail injures were between 35 and 40 and almost equivalent. Besides, during the year the number of accidents which happened because of bus was 75 and almost 65 of them got injured. Finally, In addition to all of them, there are 250 accidents consequently, more than 60% of people got damaged but there is not any data about these belonging to which one.

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rail
, heavy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
, light You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
 and bus.

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First of all
, beginning with commuter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
, noticing that in the year, the quantity of incidents and injures is lesser in comparison
 of others consequently
 they are not more than 20. There is light You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
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acidents
 were 75 and these were 25 more than heavy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
. On the other hand
, the quantity of heavy and light You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
 injures were between 35 and 40 and almost equivalent. Besides
, during the year the number of accidents which happened This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of bus was 75 and almost 65 of them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 injured.

Finally
, In addition
 to all of them, there are 250 accidents consequently
, more than 60% of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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got
 damaged This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there is not any data about these belonging to which one. 