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The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS Academic paper in 2015.

The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS Academic paper in 2015. NYNm
The given table illustrates the information about average Eilts band score in four countries in the year 2015. The test assessed on four varies modulus Listening, Reading, Writing and speaking The average score of German and French students was 6. 7 band and 6. 5 band with the overall band score. Both French and German test takers have got the highest of all modulus in speaking section 6. 6 and 6. 9 band. However they earned lowest score in reading section with 6. 1 and 6. . 3. Furthermore, Indonesian and Malay students scored an average 6. 3 and 6. 5 band. The lowest points they gained in the writing section with 6. 1 and 6. 0. Noticeably speaking was the module in which the students did good score with the respective band 6. 7 and 6. 6. Overall, The average score was above 6 four all the students. All the students earned most of the points in the Speaking section. And for other sections there was a mixed trend.
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in four countries in the year 2015. The
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assessed on four varies modulus Listening, Reading, Writing and
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The
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of German and French
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was 6. 7
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and 6. 5
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. Both French and German
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takers have
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the highest of all modulus in speaking
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6. 6 and 6. 9
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in reading
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with 6. 1 and 6.
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3.

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, Indonesian and Malay
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scored an
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6. 3 and 6. 5
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. The lowest points they gained in the writing
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with 6. 1 and 6. 0.
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did
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with the respective
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6. 7 and 6. 6.

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, The
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was above 6 four all the
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. All the
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earned most of the points in the Speaking
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. And for other
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there was a mixed trend.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS Academic paper in 2015.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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