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The graph below shows the average class size in six countries and compares it with the world average class size in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and give comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average class size in six countries and compares it with the world average class size in 2006. a0DG
The given column graph illustrates the average class in size in primary school and lower secondary school in six nations in 2006, and compares it with the world average. On the whole, the class size of the primary school in UK and Denmark was larger than the class size of lower secondary school, whereas in the other given countries it was smaller. It is clear that UK and Denmark had higher number of students in primary school (23 and 21 respectively) than those secondary classes respectively. South Korea had the highest number of students in both primary and secondary classes (nearly 35 in each). Japan had an average primary class of 26 students, whereas the secondary class size was slightly bigger with 31 average students. The biggest discrepancy in primary and secondary class size was seen in Mexico, where the primary class strength was only about 20 students, but secondary class has a little over 30 students. Iceland had the smallest primary and secondary classroom size of 15 and 17 students on an average respectively. Overall, the teacher-taught ratio was the best in Iceland with the smallest classroom size.
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in six nations in 2006, and compares it with the world
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in UK and Denmark was larger than the
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of lower
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secondary
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countries it was smaller. It is
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that UK and Denmark had higher number of
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(23 and 21
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of 26
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over 30
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the average class size in six countries and compares it with the world average class size in 2006.

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