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Secondary School Attendance 2000 2005 2009 Specialist Schools 12% 11% 10% Grammar Schools 24% 19% 12% Voluntary-controlled Schools 52% 38% 20% Community Schools 12% 32% 58%

Secondary School Attendance 2000 2005 2009 Specialist Schools 12% 11% 10% Grammar Schools 24% 19% 12% Voluntary-controlled Schools 52% 38% 20% Community Schools 12% 32% 58% 2D0b
The table reveals information about the percentages of students' attendance of four secondary school types from 2000 to 2009 Overall, the attendances of voluntary - controlled schools and community schools were much higher than other two types of schools. Generally, voluntary- controlled schools showed the most percentages of attendance. In 2000, the attendance of specialist schools was the least with only 12 % and its percentage declined gradually in 2005 and 2009 with 11 % and 10 % respectively. In the same year, the proportions of pupils attending grammar schools was two times higher than specialist schools making up 24 %. However, it also dropped in following years. Voluntary- controlled schools experienced the most amount of students' attendance accounting for 52% in 2000, it's percentage declined to 20% in 2009. In 2000, the attendance of community schools showed the least percentage samely as special schools with 12%. However, it's number increased to 50 % in 2009.
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attendance
of four secondary
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types from 2000 to 2009

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attendances
of voluntary
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controlled
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and community
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were much higher than other two types of
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.
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In 2000, the
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was the least with
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12 % and its
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declined
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was two times higher than specialist
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making up 24 %.
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also
dropped in following years.

Voluntary- controlled
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experienced the most amount of students'
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attendance
accounting for 52% in 2000, it's
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declined to 20% in 2009. In 2000, the
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of community
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with 12%.
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IELTS academic Secondary School Attendance 2000 2005 2009 Specialist Schools 12% 11% 10% Grammar Schools 24% 19% 12% Voluntary-controlled Schools 52% 38% 20% Community Schools 12% 32% 58%

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