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The two pie chart shows the spending by different kind of media in India between 2012 and 2017

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The rendered information about the proportion of AD spending by various kinds of media in India between 2012 and 2017 is depicted by two Pie Charts in overall it is why was manifested that the ad spending by TV was maximum rather than outdoor was constant between 2012 and 2017 to begin with the ad spending by TV was top of the list in 2017 and its slightly decreased by 2% in 2017 for the more the ad spending by print between 2012 and 2017 was 30% and 38% prospectively additionally the difference was noticed by 9% in digital media between 2012 and 2070 moving towards the Outdoor Media spending constant at between 2012 and 2017 in India finally the ad spending by radio was 7% in 2012 and it experience 3% less than 2012 the cinema do not illustrate the ad between 2012 and 2017
The rendered information about the proportion of AD
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by TV was maximum
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by print between 2012 and 2017 was 30% and 38%
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the ad
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by radio was 7% in 2012 and it
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3% less than 2012 the cinema do not illustrate the ad between 2012 and 2017
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IELTS academic The two pie chart shows the spending by different kind of media in India between 2012 and 2017

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