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The two pie chart shows the source of energy in the USA between 1980 and 1990

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The rendered information about the main source of energy namely oil natural gas Koyal hydroelectric power Nuclear power in the USA between 1980 and 1990 is depicted by two Pie Charts the data has been calibrated by percentage in it is vibrant manifested that the natural gases was a negligible difference USA between 1980 and 1990 is depicted by two Pie Charts the data has been calibrated by percentages in overall it is vibrated manifested that the natural gas was negligible difference between 1980 and 1992 begin with the oil was top of the list in 1980 nevertheless the oil experience and 9% minimum by 42% in 1980 for the more the coil Energy in USA between 1980 1990 was the difference notice 5% moving towards a nuclear power between 1989 and 1991 22% and 27% respectively eventually the hydroelectric power between 1980 and 1990
The rendered information about the main source of energy
namely
oil natural gas
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Koyal
hydroelectric
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power
Nuclear
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power
in the USA between 1980 and 1990
is depicted
by two Pie Charts the data has
been calibrated
by percentage in it is vibrant manifested that the natural gases was a negligible difference USA between 1980 and 1990
is depicted
by two Pie Charts the data has
been calibrated
by percentages in
overall
it
is vibrated
manifested that the natural gas was negligible difference between 1980 and 1992
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begin
with the oil was top of the list in 1980
nevertheless
the oil experience and 9% minimum by 42% in 1980 for the more the coil Energy
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in USA
between 1980 1990 was the difference notice 5% moving towards a nuclear
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power
between 1989 and 1991 22% and 27%
respectively
eventually
the hydroelectric
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power
between 1980 and 1990
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IELTS academic The two pie chart shows the source of energy in the USA between 1980 and 1990

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