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The two pie chart below show change in world population by region between 1900 and 2000

The two pie chart below show change in world population by region between 1900 and 2000 LP66
These pie charts illustrate the percentage change in World Population between 1900 and 2000. The major region represent as percentage of total world population. From 1990 to 2000 Africa's population increase from 4. 5 % to 10% while Latin America's percentage grew from 3 % to 8%. On the other hand the percentage of population decrease in Asia and Europe during the period. Asia dropped from 60% to 54% while Europe's percentage decline from 25 % to 14%. North America however, projects no change remaining at 5% of world population during the period. The Middle East and North America new category in 2000 represents 6% of world population. The percentage of population in remaining area Rose slightly from 2. 5% to 3%. Overall, This represents a huge grew in the number of human on the world from 1600 million to 6 billion in just one hundred years. Most of this population growth occurs in developing countries.
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between 1900 and 2000. The major region represent as
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of total
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population.

From 1990 to 2000 Africa's
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increase from 4. 5 % to 10% while Latin America's
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grew from 3 % to 8%.
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decrease in Asia and Europe during the period. Asia dropped from 60% to 54% while Europe's
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decline from 25 % to 14%. North America
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remaining at 5% of
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during the period. The Middle East and North America new category in 2000 represents 6% of
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world
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. The
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in remaining area Rose
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from 2. 5% to 3%.

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from 1600 million to 6 billion in
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one hundred years. Most of this
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growth occurs in
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developing countries
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IELTS academic The two pie chart below show change in world population by region between 1900 and 2000

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