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The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. RJMG
The set of maps illustrate the layout of the coastal village of Seaville in the years 1980 and 2010. Focusing on the year 1980 map, the entire village was surrounded by the sea. The northern part of the village had one woodland area, while one river was passed through north to south. And some sand dunes and tea rooms were located on the south side of the Seaville. Holiday cottages were situated beside the sea as well as on the west side. When the hotel was built on the southern part of the map. Over the period of thirty years, some changed occurred in the Seaville. The major one was the holiday cottages were shifted on the east bank of a river. One more hotel and restaurant was constructed on the place of tea rooms and sand dunes. Beside the river, a boat club and also a small Retirement village was built. Woodland and holiday cottages were replaced by permanent houses in 2010. Additionally, a golf course was on the north side. Overall, it can be seen that many developments happened during thirty years, and several facilities available in the Seaville.
The set of maps
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illustrate
the layout of the coastal
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village
of
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Seaville
in the years 1980 and 2010.

Focusing on the
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year
1980 map, the entire
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village
was surrounded
by the sea. The northern part of the
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village
had one woodland area, while one river
was passed
through north to south. And
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some
sand dunes and tea rooms
were located
on the south side of the
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Seaville
. Holiday cottages
were situated
beside the sea
as well
as on the west side.
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When
the hotel
was built
on the southern part of the map.

Over the period of thirty years,
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some
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changed
occurred in the
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Seaville
. The major one was the holiday cottages
were shifted
on the east bank of a river. One more hotel and restaurant
was constructed
on the place of tea rooms and sand dunes. Beside the river, a boat club and
also
a
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small
Retirement
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village
was built
. Woodland and holiday cottages
were replaced
by permanent
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houses
in 2010.
Additionally
, a golf course was on the north side.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that
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many
developments happened during thirty years, and several facilities available in the
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Seaville
.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.

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4 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
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