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The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. RJMG

The set of maps illustrate the layout of the coastal village of Seaville in the years 1980 and 2010. Focusing on the year 1980 map, the entire village was surrounded by the sea. The northern part of the village had one woodland area, while one river was passed through north to south. And some sand dunes and tea rooms were located on the south side of the Seaville. Holiday cottages were situated beside the sea as well as on the west side. When the hotel was built on the southern part of the map. Over the period of thirty years, some changed occurred in the Seaville. The major one was the holiday cottages were shifted on the east bank of a river. One more hotel and restaurant was constructed on the place of tea rooms and sand dunes. Beside the river, a boat club and also a small Retirement village was built. Woodland and holiday cottages were replaced by permanent houses in 2010. Additionally, a golf course was on the north side. Overall, it can be seen that many developments happened during thirty years, and several facilities available in the Seaville.

The set of maps Did you mean "illustrates"?illustrates
illustrate
 the layout of the coastal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 of Possible spelling mistake found.SevilleSaville
Seaville
 in the years 1980 and 2010.

Focusing on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1980 map, the entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
was surrounded
 by the sea. The northern part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 had one woodland area, while one river was passed
 through north to south. And This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sand dunes and tea rooms were located
 on the south side of the Possible spelling mistake found.SevilleSaville
Seaville
. Holiday cottages were situated
 beside the sea as well
 as on the west side. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 the hotel was built
 on the southern part of the map.

Over the period of thirty years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 occurred in the Possible spelling mistake found.SevilleSaville
Seaville
. The major one was the holiday cottages were shifted
 on the east bank of a river. One more hotel and restaurant was constructed
 on the place of tea rooms and sand dunes. Beside the river, a boat club and also
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 Retirement You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
was built
. Woodland and holiday cottages were replaced
 by permanent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 in 2010. Additionally
, a golf course was on the north side.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 developments happened during thirty years, and several facilities available in the Possible spelling mistake found.SevilleSaville
Seaville
. 