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The two pictures depict the layout of Langley City from 1910 to 1950.

The two pictures depict the layout of Langley City from 1910 to 1950. OweVM

The two pictures depict the layout of Langley City from 1910 to 1950. Overall, a number of noticeable improvements can be seen in those maps, particularly in the removal of industrial and sanitation areas in the early of 19 century and the development of Sherman park and other infrastructures in the middle of 19 century. In 1910, the housing was dominated the Langley ground on the east side and in the middle of the city. On the top of the maps, a factory and a wasteland stood together. Furthermore, alongside two rows of houses in Sherman Street, there was a store, laundry, and cafe. In addition, there was a wasteland in the south area, a railway worker's cottage, and a railway line on the south. After thirty years, a significant improvement can be seen in some places. A lot of townhouses had been replaced by some flats, while an industrial area had been demolished to make way for Sherman Mansions. Moreover, some places, including wasteland, worker's cottages, and railway, were flattened to provide more space on Sherman Park and the opening of New Lane street. Furthermore, store buildings had improved, and other trading buildings had been relocated.

The two pictures depict the layout of Langley City from 1910 to 1950.

Overall
, a number of noticeable improvements can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in those maps, particularly
 in the removal of industrial and sanitation areas in The phrase 'the early of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the early of
Did you mean "19th century"?19th century
19 century
 and the development of Sherman park and other infrastructures in the middle of Did you mean "19th century"?19th century
19 century
.

In 1910, the housing was dominated
 the Langley ground on the east side and in the middle of the city. On the top of the maps, a factory and a wasteland stood together. Furthermore
, alongside two rows of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 in Sherman Street, there was a store, laundry, and 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. In addition
, there was a wasteland in the south area, a railway worker's cottage, and a railway line on the south.

After thirty years, a significant improvement can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
A lot of
 townhouses had been replaced
 by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 flats, while an industrial area had been demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for Sherman Mansions. Moreover
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places, including wasteland, worker's cottages, and railway, were flattened
 to provide more space on Sherman Park and the opening of New Lane street. Furthermore
, store buildings had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
, and other trading buildings had been relocated
. 