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The maps show a road system as it is now and the propesed changes in future.

The maps show a road system as it is now and the propesed changes in future. a7mAG
The maps compare the present layout of a road system with its future design. What stands out from the maps is that the road system will become less frequent accident than now. Looking at the current plan of of the road system reveals that there are 4 places, which have frequent accident. There also 3 roads, namely City road, Forest road and Low Lane. The former road lies in the North, while the latter locating across the middle. The last road is situated in the West of the map. A suppermarket is located in North-East of the map, which can only from City road. There are also 6 houses are situated in the middle of the road system. It terms of the future developments, it is planned that there will be Roundabout in the middle of the map. Similarly, traffic lights are expected to be built in the West of the road system. Houses and Forest road are expected to remain the same in the map. Between of the Forest and City roads is predicted that built small road, which can go only to suppermarket.
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maps
compare the present layout of a
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road
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system
with its future design.

What stands out from the
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maps
is that the
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road
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system
will become less frequent accident than
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now
.

Looking at the
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current
plan
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of of
the
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road
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system
reveals that there are 4 places, which have frequent accident. There
also
3
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roads
,
namely
City
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road
, Forest
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road
and Low Lane. The former
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road
lies in the North, while the latter locating across the middle. The last
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road
is situated
in the West of the
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map
. A
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suppermarket
is located
in North-East of the
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map
, which can
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only
from City
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road
. There are
also
6
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houses
are situated
in the middle of the
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road
system.

It terms of the future developments, it
is planned
that there will be Roundabout in the middle of the
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map
.
Similarly
, traffic lights are
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expected
to
be built
in the West of the
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road
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system
.
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Houses
and Forest
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road
are
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expected
to remain the same in the
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map
. Between of the Forest and City
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roads
is predicted
that built
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small
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road
, which can go
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suppermarket
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IELTS academic The maps show a road system as it is now and the propesed changes in future.

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