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The two maps show Tilden airport and the surrounding area in 1985 and 2015.

The two maps show Tilden airport and the surrounding area in 1985 and 2015. eE2A7
The two maps illustrate how Tilden airport and the immediate vicinity were developed over a 30-year period. Overall, it is clear that Tilden airport and the surrounding territory saw significant improvements, including the construction of transportation and the recreational facilities throughout the given period, which made Tilden airport international by 2015. The most notable change is that international terminal and car park, which are located in the west were expanded, while domestic terminal between them stayed the same. There was Johnson’s farm on the top right hand corner in 1985, which was demolished and converted into two separate buildings business park and housing estate. Whilst, an additional runway was constructed between international terminal and business park, which goes from the center to northwest. The neighboring areas are connected to the city of Tilden via one road, which is 8 kilometers. Across these road a light rail wasconstructed, connecting the bus and light rail station. Two separate buildings of the factory were converted into airport support service and hotel/conference center.
The two maps illustrate how
Tilden
airport
and the immediate vicinity
were developed
over a 30-year period.

Overall
, it is
clear
that
Tilden
airport
and the surrounding territory
saw
significant improvements, including the construction of transportation and the recreational facilities throughout the
given
period, which made
Tilden
airport
international by 2015.

The most notable
change
is that international terminal and car park, which
are located
in the west
were expanded
, while domestic terminal between them stayed the same. There was Johnson’s farm on the top
right hand
corner in 1985, which
was demolished
and converted into two separate buildings business park and housing estate. Whilst, an additional runway
was constructed
between international terminal and business park, which goes from the center to northwest. The neighboring areas
are connected
to the city of
Tilden
via one road, which is 8 kilometers. Across these road a light rail
wasconstructed
, connecting the bus and light rail station. Two separate buildings of the factory
were converted
into
airport
support service and hotel/conference center.
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IELTS academic The two maps show Tilden airport and the surrounding area in 1985 and 2015.

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