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The two maps show the construction of some facilities in an island.

The two maps show the construction of some facilities in an island. BgYOw
The two maps compares the construction of some facilities provided in 100 meters of space in an island. It is evident that non of trees has been cutted during the changes and also there is lots of accomodation provided in this Island after the changes. There is a hotel located in center of the island which contains a reception and lots of rooms in both side of the isalnd. The rooms are located in a circular shap in east and west of the reception. Each side contains 8 and 6 rooms respectively. In the north of the reception, there is a restaurant which exactly located in north of the island. No chages happend in east of the island but in contrast in the west of the island, there is a great beach and a great place provided for swimming and in the south of the island, small pier is been built.
The two maps compares the construction of
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some
facilities provided in 100 meters of space
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in an island
.

It is evident that non of trees has been
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cutted
during the
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changes
and
also
there is lots of
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accomodation
provided in this
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Island
after the
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changes
.

There is a hotel located in center of the
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island
which contains a reception and lots of rooms in both side of the
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isalnd
. The rooms
are located
in a circular
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shap
in east and west of the reception. Each side contains 8 and 6 rooms
respectively
. In the north of the reception, there is a restaurant which exactly located in north of the island.

No
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chages
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happend
in east of the
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island
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but
in contrast
in the west of the
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island
, there is a great beach and a great place provided for swimming and in the south of the
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island
,
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small
pier
is been
built.
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IELTS academic The two maps show the construction of some facilities in an island.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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