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The table shows the cost of water in five cities.

The table shows the cost of water in five cities. 2a6eA
The table chart illustrates the information about the price of water in five nations, Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth and Sydney. The data has been calibrated in form of dollars. Overall, the most striking fact could be emerged from the chart is that the maximum household bills of water in Perth. However, the minimum average bill per household in Melbourne during the given time. From the first glance it is lucid that, the figure witnessed $0. 42 usage change per kilometers up to 125k in Adelaide then over 125k it was increased by 50. After that, $312 was household average bills. Then it was followed by Brisbane. $0. 81, $0. 84 and total water charges 310. According to the third country, a striking similarity could be observed in Melbourne usage change up to 125k and over 125k. And the water charges just under three hundreds. Probing further, in Sydney people pay similar charges for usage changes. 332 dollars pay for water bills. In the Perth, $0. 42, $ 1. 50 spent for change respectively
The table chart illustrates the information about the price of
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water
in five nations, Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth and Sydney. The data has
been calibrated
in form of dollars.

Overall
, the most striking fact could
be emerged
from the chart is that the maximum household
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bills
of
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water
in Perth.
However
, the minimum average
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bill
per household in Melbourne during the
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given
time.

From the
first
glance it is lucid that, the figure witnessed $0. 42 usage
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change
per kilometers up to 125k in Adelaide then over 125k it
was increased
by 50. After that, $312 was household average
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bills
. Then it
was followed
by Brisbane. $0. 81, $0. 84 and total
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water
charges 310. According to the third country, a striking similarity could
be observed
in Melbourne usage
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change
up to 125k and over 125k. And the
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water
charges
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just
under three hundreds.

Probing
further
, in Sydney
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people
pay similar charges for usage
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changes
. 332 dollars pay for
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water
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bills
. In the Perth, $0. 42,
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$ 1
. 50 spent for
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change
respectively
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IELTS academic The table shows the cost of water in five cities.

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