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The two maps show how the town of Lakeside developed over a ten-year period from 2000 to 2009.

The two maps show how the town of Lakeside developed over a ten-year period from 2000 to 2009. 95nM0

Overall, over the period shown Lakeside became more developed and industrialized with less natural beauty but far more places for shopping, studying and relaxation. A more detailed look at the map revealed that in 2000, there was a space for home on the southern side of a river, while the remaining two residential area were located on the northern side of the river. Moreover, there was a small scale's industrial complex on the either side of the lake and one of the residential areas, which was placed on the downside of the diagram. Also, warehouse, old town, art center, and school were located on the upside of the river at the northern side of the map. In 2009, some had been arranged and looked quite different. Above all, the industrial complex was enlarged and a shopping center was constructed where there had been one of the residential areas, respectively, whereas old facilities ranging from the warehouse to the old town. In addition, a car park was newly built where the warehouse used to be, while there were offices and a university in the place of the old

Overall
, over the period shown Lakeside became more developed and industrialized with less natural beauty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 far more places for shopping, studying and relaxation.

A more detailed look at the map revealed that in 2000, there was a space for home on the southern side of a river, while the remaining two residential area were located
 on the northern side of the river. Moreover
, there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 scale's industrial complex on the either side of the lake and one of the residential areas, which was placed
 on the downside of the diagram. Also
, warehouse, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 town, art center, and school were located
 on the upside of the river at the northern side of the map.

In 2009, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 had been arranged
 and looked quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
. Above all
, the industrial complex was enlarged
 and a shopping center was constructed
 where there had been one of the residential areas, respectively
, whereas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 facilities ranging from the warehouse to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 town. In addition
, a car park was newly
 built where the warehouse This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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