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Some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai

Some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai k629N

The maps illustrate how around the Clock Tower in Dubai has developed in recent decades. In the mentioned timespan and place, all trees have been eliminated and replaced by high-rise buildings. Furthermore, traffic congestion has increased significantly. From the map, we can see there were just a house and a multi-level building in the top-left of the roundabout, which both has been knocked-down and multi-storey constructions has been erected in the area. On the other hand, there were lofty structures in the top-right of the square which one of them has been modernized and the other ne has been replaced by a new one. Moreover, the area has been filled with skyscrapers. Nevertheless, except of planting some trees around the center of the roundabout, there hasn’t occurred any visible construction in the center and the bottom of the map. To sum up, this area has been modernized and huge buildings has been built in these years, consequently, the area has been converted to a crowded and busy place from a sleepy neighborhood.

The maps illustrate how around the Clock Tower in Dubai has developed in recent decades. In the mentioned Possible spelling mistake found.time spantimes pan
timespan
 and place, all trees have been eliminated
 and replaced by high-rise buildings. Furthermore
, traffic congestion has increased significantly
.

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see
 there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and a multi-level building in the top-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the roundabout, which both has been knocked
-down and Possible spelling mistake found.multistory
multi-storey
 constructions has been erected
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. On the other hand
, there were lofty structures in the top-right of the square which one of them has been modernized
 and the other Did you mean "né", "me", or "no"?némeno
ne
 has been replaced
 by a new one. Moreover
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been filled
 with skyscrapers.

Nevertheless
, except of planting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees around the center of the roundabout, there hasn’t occurred any visible construction in the center and the bottom of the map.

To sum up, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been modernized
 and huge buildings has been built
 in these years, consequently
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been converted
 to a crowded and busy place from a sleepy neighborhood. 