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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. make comparisons where relevant. 95nyX
The graph illustrates the amount of visitors to Vatican Museums, London Science Museum, Shenzhen Museum and Louvre Museum among 1980 and 2015. Overall, the visiting of Louvre and Vatican Museum experienced upward trend, while the London Science Museum shows the downward trend. The Shenzhen Museum illustrates as upward as downward trend, being approximately the same at the end of the period. The number of visitors in Louvre was less than 8 millions, it began grow and raised to about 9 millions in 1995. It dropped to slightly over 8 million visitors between 1995 and 2000, and reached the peak in 2015, being about 9. 5 millions. The amount of visitors in Vatican Museum was less than 5 millions. It started rocked and took the highest point in 2015. The number of visitors in London Science Museum was toughly 4 millions, it begun decrease to the lowest amount of approximately 2 millions in 2015. The Shenzhen Museum wasn’t much popular in 1980, it dropped to toughly 3 million visitors in 1990. It was constant between 1995 and 2000, and finally increased to the roundly the same meaning as in 1990.
The graph illustrates the amount of
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visitors
to Vatican
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Museums
, London Science
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Museum
, Shenzhen
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Museum
and Louvre
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Museum
among 1980 and 2015.

Overall
, the visiting of Louvre and Vatican
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Museum
experienced upward trend, while the London Science
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Museum
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shows
the downward trend. The Shenzhen
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Museum
illustrates as upward as downward trend, being approximately the same at the
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end
of the period.

The number of
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visitors
in Louvre was less than 8
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millions
, it began grow and raised to about 9
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millions
in 1995. It dropped to
slightly
over 8
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million
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visitors
between 1995 and 2000, and reached the peak in 2015, being about 9. 5
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millions
. The amount of
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visitors
in Vatican
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Museum
was less than 5
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millions
. It
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started
rocked and took the highest point in 2015.

The number of
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visitors
in London Science
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Museum
was
toughly
4
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millions
, it begun decrease to the lowest amount of approximately 2
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millions
in 2015.

The Shenzhen
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Museum
wasn’t much popular in 1980, it dropped to
toughly
3
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million
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visitors
in 1990. It was constant between 1995 and 2000, and
finally
increased to the
roundly
the same meaning as in 1990.
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