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The two maps indicate the contrast of a sport complex in particular university in slightly three decadd(1990 until now).

The two maps indicate the contrast of a sport complex in particular university in slightly three decadd(1990 until now). DqDap
Overall, this campus had a combination is to accommodation space; park and car park has been converted to the brand new courts (basketball courts and tennis courts). According to the tennis court, it has been relocated from right side to the left side which make it dubble at the time of writing. Recreation had more prominence by now. This can be be seen in the fact that the convenience has been organized by the new structure which made significant renovation and alternation. Furthermore, outdoor pool has been transformed to the indoor pool, and changing room has been erected as well as modernized which led it to relocated and made it much more extended at the present. On top of that, the tennis court space (right side) replaced with spacious fitness center.
Overall
, this campus had a combination is to accommodation space; park and car park has
been converted
to the
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brand new
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courts
(basketball
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courts
and tennis
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courts)
. According to the tennis
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court
, it has
been relocated
from right side to the
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left
side which
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make
it
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dubble
at the time of writing. Recreation had more prominence by
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now
. This can be
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be
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seen
in the fact that the convenience has
been organized
by the new structure which made significant renovation and alternation.
Furthermore
, outdoor pool has
been transformed
to the indoor pool, and changing room has
been erected
as well
as modernized which led it to relocated and made it much more extended at the present.
On top of that
, the tennis
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court
space (right side) replaced with spacious fitness center.
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IELTS academic The two maps indicate the contrast of a sport complex in particular university in slightly three decadd(1990 until now).

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